Editing Processes

What is your process you use when you edit your works?

Me, I tend to revise as much as I can on the first round.

But when I get to a chapter that stumps me I go right back to the beginning of the story and start once again. Each time I find something else at the beginning of the story that can be tweaked just a little bit more.

I keep doing this until I get passed that chapter that initially stumped me and continue on my way until I come across another problem chapter.

This seems to help me with making sure the story is consistent and solid. I just keep rereading that which I have already edited each time looking for more things to tweak.

Witch Book was edited in this fashion.

Originally this was not the way I edited. I had not process or procedure. I would just read and look for spelling and grammar errors.

But editing is much more than spelling and grammar. It is looking to make sure your book has enough glue in-between the pages to make sure it holds together.

Are the characters built up enough to make sure the reader can relate to them?

Do you have enough description or too much?

Does your plot make sense?

Is there enough conflict?

Did the reason why you wrote the story make it into the pages?

And last but not least, is it too much of a cliff hanger? Did you answer all the questions that needed to be answered before that last pages says “the end”?

 

ROW80 Update:

So far I have edited the first eight chapters of Road Salt. Each time I have tweaked the beginning just a little bit more. It has been kind of like sculpting.

But even though I am only on chapter nine I am half way done with the edit.

I have a four day weekend and will be stepping out for a couple of hours and I plan to be right back at it.

I still have my goal of having this edit done by Christmas and maybe have the eBook edition ready by the first of the year.

My intention is to use the KDP select option for this book for the first three months then it can go live everywhere else.

It seems like every time I publish another story I find something else to test, a different avenue, a different photo stock source, or what not.

This time it will be Kindle Select.

Bake, Bake, Bake Your Booty

My week before Christmas has been nothing about writing. I have been a baking fool.

On Thursday I baked a batch of lemon sugar cookies, they were all gone by Sunday. (Sweets do not last in our home, as you will soon see.)

Then on Friday I baked a lemon bunt cake from scratch. I didn’t have any cake flour and instead I used all-purpose. It came out kind of grainy but it tasted good none the less. The cake was gone by Sunday.

Snicker Doodles were my focus on Sunday. They were all gone by Monday. My son took all but the last two cookies to work. They are one of his favorite cookies.

On Monday I made Elephant Ears. I only made enough to go around with everyone getting just one of these tasty treats.

Since on Tuesday all the cookies were gone, I made a batch of Gingerbread Cookies. This was a first time for me. They came out pretty good even though I was a little bit short on the molasses and I didn’t have any dark brown sugar – only light brown.

Once again on Wednesday I made another batch of lemon sugar cookies. This time I doubled the batch so I would have some to bring in to work for our little Christmas party. I had to literally set aside and put a note on these cookies saying do not touch, since our party is on Friday.

Then tonight, Thursday, I made a double batch of Peach Coffee cake to bring in to work tomorrow with the cookies I stashed from the other day.

I think that Friday will be Fudge night. I like to make chocolate fudge which I plan to give away to my neighbors for holiday gifts.

All this baking has left me with no time to write. Hopefully I will do some catching up this weekend. I have a nice long four day weekend and I don’t plan on spending it cooking. My mom has plans on stepping into the kitchen and cooking our Christmas Turkey.

I am still shooting to have the first edit of Road Salt done by Christmas. Only time will tell.

If I don’t happen to make it back here again before Christmas to post – let me not be politically correct.

Merry Christmas Everyone